“Hey Sam come over here and take a picture for my snapchat” my brother asked. “Ok” I replied. I took the photo as he tensed his biceps like a bodybuilder trying to look cool at the same time. He said “Wait I need another one with my new shirt” I sighed “You're such an idiot” He quickly pushed his brown hair to the side just to try make himself look better. His hazel eyes glittered as the flash went off. He said “ No not enough of my legs” I replied “You better be paying me” I stood further back to get his long hairy legs into the photo. He opened his big mouth on his funny looking face and said “Thanks bro” I looked at him in anger and walked away without saying anything.
Wednesday, 13 May 2015
Character Desciption
Character Description
“Hey Sam come over here and take a picture for my snapchat” my brother asked. “Ok” I replied. I took the photo as he tensed his biceps like a bodybuilder trying to look cool at the same time. He said “Wait I need another one with my new shirt” I sighed “You're such an idiot” He quickly pushed his brown hair to the side just to try make himself look better. His hazel eyes glittered as the flash went off. He said “ No not enough of my legs” I replied “You better be paying me” I stood further back to get his long hairy legs into the photo. He opened his big mouth on his funny looking face and said “Thanks bro” I looked at him in anger and walked away without saying anything.
“Hey Sam come over here and take a picture for my snapchat” my brother asked. “Ok” I replied. I took the photo as he tensed his biceps like a bodybuilder trying to look cool at the same time. He said “Wait I need another one with my new shirt” I sighed “You're such an idiot” He quickly pushed his brown hair to the side just to try make himself look better. His hazel eyes glittered as the flash went off. He said “ No not enough of my legs” I replied “You better be paying me” I stood further back to get his long hairy legs into the photo. He opened his big mouth on his funny looking face and said “Thanks bro” I looked at him in anger and walked away without saying anything.
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I like how your brother wants to be a fashion star and have lots of pictures. I think you could work on describing your brother more about the face but overall I really liked your character description.
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